Tuesday, September 25, 2007

3rd assignment

I wish you would tell me
the words i want to hear
I wish you would be here
to catch my every tear

Do you know that i'm still here
i'm still waiting
Do you know i still care
i keep thinking

I gave you everything
my heart and soul
I gave you all i had
anything in the whole world

Do you see what we
could have been
Do you see we
would have been happy till the end

It's over now
everything is done
It's over now
you are gone

2 comments:

Jamie's Blog said...

This one is really strong!!! my goodness i think i have an idea what this is about..it has a lot of meaning and that's great. I think the "I gave you everything " part was amazing it really shows what you mean.. This one is my favorite just because i love your word choices and i just plain like love poems even though this is a sad love poem but it's still amazing!!

love you

jam

Sarah's Blog said...

I wouldn't change anything in either of the poems.